Enough

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She must cook

And she must sweep

So packed she is

She can’t even weep

You don’t budge

And you won’t help

When asked for a hand

You let out a yelp

You go to work you say

Come on – so does she

Allow her a breather

Be a man – can you be?

When she is all done

You don’t even thank

Somehow being a man

You get a higher rank

I don’t think you care

She’s living or she’s dead

I know you love her

But only when in bed

It’s not a home for her

It’s more like a cage

I think she’s had enough

Just beware of her rage!

© Sundaram Chauhan
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    1. Hi… there has been something called life that’s keeping me away from the blogging streets, but I m fighting to come back. 😁… and of course I m gonna cover your poetic reflections. Just checked… hv missed too much of you…

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    1. Thanks so much dear… So nice of you to say that… It’s just that I feel a little inadequate when it comes to poetry… I can’t write it like you do. My poems are generally rhymes (the old school), and mostly prosaic… So I try, but then leave it in the middle. But I wll definitely keep trying now that you have said that…Thanks so much 🙏✌🙏

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      1. You know, try as I might, I can never do poems that rhyme. And I am always amazed at how others like yourself can do it. When I do try, they always feel stilted, something I never sense in yours. Your feelings of being inadequate are so unjustified. The trouble is not the work. It is the self-doubt. We all suffer from that. But I feel once we get it out, all it takes afterwards is refining and refining. You have every talent for poetry, so don’t give up. I leave things in the middle too. But I read that no writing is wasted. It may get picked up later, on another idea is generated from it.

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      2. That was so reassuring Vera. I had to read back a couple of my poems to see what you’re saying. But I always thought rhyming was the easiest form, and the real poets don’t do rhymes. Some of the best ones I know on WP (yeah…you included🤘) are so good at expressing with blank verses… But I get your point my lovely friend… I will pick back all the half written poems again…🖖✌🖖:-):-)

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  1. Hello Sundaram

    My heartfelt thanks to you for following my blog, and for all the likes & comments!And hope we continue to grow and support each other in this journey!

    Also, my blog A Wayward Scribbles reached the milestone of 500+ followers last month and I thought why not celebrate it!

    So, I’m very excited to personally invite you to my blog party(23 May, 2018), since you’re one of those amazing blogger who chose to follow my blog and I would love to show my gratitude!

    See you at the party!
    Nathi

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      1. Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation! I’ll be publishing a post on 23rd titled blog party, just drop by and have fun – share links to your posts, meet other bloggers and make new friends!

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  2. So amazingly you’ve written,
    So amazingly you’ve smitten.

    This one exposes the fake society
    and it’s vile
    I love your poems for their content
    and the style

    Love.

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